Hearts of Syrup.


Influenced by 2 stupid people, and one of my favorite poets e.e. cummings. It was hard writing this, cummings was known to NOT use proper capitalization (I love to), and write things that are very hard to read, yet strong, and in all made sense. His punctuation was horrible on purpose to convey meaning ( I hate horrible punctuation). Like I said……….VERY challenging. Here goes nothing! Or…..something I don’t know.

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“Hearts of Syrup”

o! hallow be thy name (if names were real)
would not you think?
but

u
do not ..see anything:
which causes you to blink

what a shallow hole with love
you dug
an fell

f
a
l
l
i
n
g

deepandstupid
yet rather unique
you d?-on-‘t know anything

which is everything backwards
what you does not it speak about?
and when?

(I spoke once)
times many
but the voice left
(dumb and deaf)

send many
(she)
Sends empty

but you’ve picked up
and she DID as well
well

hmmm

not saying much
it flew (past tense of your relationship)
like wings without dove

Yet I am the one
that
is not in love?

– s.m. rich

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